Mei · SingaporeCross-border shop owner · The customer has waited two daysCustomer email · Professional · StandardIllustrative storyHi Ms. Alvarez, i checked the order 8841 and the delivery will arrive at thursday 23 october. we are sorry for the delay and want to make things right. we can offer you a 15% refund on this order, or we can send a replacement at no cost. please let us know which option you prefer. Best, Mei
Hi Ms. Alvarez, I checked order 8841 and can confirm the delivery is scheduled for Thursday 23 October. We're sorry for the delay and would like to make things right: you can choose a 15% refund on this order or a replacement at no cost. Please let us know which option you prefer. Best, Mei
What changed: She did not want the apology to sound empty, and she did not add a promise; the edit simply makes the checked delivery plan and the two existing options clear.
Before sending: Before sending, she checks the order number, the original date, the signature and the 15% refund. If a sentence no longer sounds like her, she changes it back.
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